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1. The 2,800 square-foot four-bedroom house will be built on a concrete foundation.

2. Carlton, owner of Palouse Synergy Systems said eastern Washington could be transformed into a renewable energy leader if people understood the benefits.

3. “I got a double with a full bath,” John Gardner, WSU Vice President of Economic Development and Global Engagement, said. “I lived in Gannon-Golds for two years, and then I switched over here—[this is a] huge difference.”

4. PCEI leaders hope to change that by offering workshops like the artists’ studio roof, so that locals value and know how to implement sustainable techniques, she said.

5. “The new dorm is likely to receive the silver rating,” Gardner said.
*Transition
"Everything we do has a consequence,” Englund said about sustainability methods, consumption, and ecological footprints. “We just have to be aware [of] the butterfly effect.”

6. He also does work in fundraising to raise money for student scholarships.
*He also works in fundraising for student scholarships.

7. She said she has been ostracized in her dorm and if things keep going like they are she might move to another hall.
*She has been ostracized in her dorm, and if it continue like they are she might move to another hall, she said.
*slang 'things'

8. Though helping to improve Pullman’s atmosphere, Sherman said SEL doesn’t make Pullman completely immune from the recession.
*Though helping to improve Pullman's economic status the SEL does not make Pullman completely immune from the recession, Sherman said.